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04/03/2007 05:17:48 AM |
Greetings from the Critiaue Club
Fit: This image fits the challenge well, someone is using a cellphone.
Composition: Nicely composed with your girlfriend almost filling the frame without being overbearing. The cellphone in the front helps form a nice diagonal leading us towards her face.
Technical: It may be because this was a last minute entry but the increased brightness is what hurt this image I feel. There is good contrast between dark and light areas but each of these is at the extreme end of the scale. It just feels a bit bright. The DOF is nice as the cellphone in front is OOF enough not to draw too much attention but is still a key element in the image.
Feel: A fun shot that shows nice emotion in your model. I just can't get past the fact that it is a bit "in your face" with the brightness.
PM me if you have any queries. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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03/27/2007 05:37:14 PM |
The coloring is very clear and it is very in focus! I also like the angle it was taken from! |
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03/24/2007 07:05:01 PM |
she interests me. i want to know what she's gossiping about. |
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03/24/2007 03:40:37 PM |
Great expression, nicely composed and focused. |
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03/24/2007 02:15:35 AM |
whover the model is, makes this shot totally.
I hate the whole "talking headshot" thing.. but that smile makes this shot stand out. Well done for picking this one to submit |
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03/22/2007 11:13:59 AM |
Good picture. I like the lighting. |
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03/22/2007 12:09:40 AM |
good potrait.. and the contrast and b/w works well.. |
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03/21/2007 10:03:54 PM |
I could picture someone doing this. |
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03/21/2007 09:05:23 PM |
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03/21/2007 11:29:07 AM |
I really like the contrast as well as the genuine feel to this image. |
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