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04/16/2007 08:56:36 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this is a very strong image. The person, the moon, and the upper circle form a triangle that gives the eyes a way to move through the picture. Also, the right arm helps to direct the eyes upward.
Technically, you have done well at combining the different images to "fit" with each other. I think the thing that is most distracting to me is that it looks like the light should be coming from the "moon" yet the white dressing gown is very bright, seemingly lit from the opposite side. This is a small detail, but one that doesn't add to the reality of shot.
Otherwise, a neat idea, and good execution. I'm frankly surprised it didn't score higher.
If you have further questions, or need me to clarify or explain something, please let me know.
karmat |
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04/10/2007 12:31:42 AM |
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04/09/2007 03:00:03 AM |
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04/03/2007 08:39:58 PM |
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04/03/2007 08:11:17 PM |
4/4
Contre-jour a day early..... very good job |
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04/03/2007 03:58:08 PM |
great idea for the challenge.. it took me a second to realize that was the moon.. :-).. 10 |
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04/03/2007 10:39:10 AM |
Nice editing. :) only I wish the light was coming from the light flare in the picture, it seems a little backwards that we can see the light source on the top right but that the actual light is coming from the bottom left... did I explain that well at all? :) |
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04/03/2007 10:19:13 AM |
Very beautifully executed, looks real mystical |
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04/03/2007 01:56:26 AM |
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04/03/2007 01:35:21 AM |
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04/03/2007 12:11:53 AM |
nice concept. love the rays |
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