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05/05/2007 09:27:15 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Well you definitely shot an image which concentrates its emphasis on a thirds point, however as it is this image is a bit uninteresting. I think if you had moved the jar to the right side, so the full shadow is included in the image it would have been a bit more dynamic. Also the bit of grass in the background distract, cropping to remove that would help. Good for you entering anyway and I wish you luck with future entries.
Cindi |
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05/01/2007 03:45:00 PM |
| Is this WhiteRook? If so you might have done it again. |
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04/30/2007 07:38:21 AM |
| Sorry but since you were already cropping this shot, why leave in the pole in the upper left corner? Also I would have preferred it had the shadow of the bottle been in the shot, I think a step to the left would have eliminated that pole and kept the shadow, what do you think? |
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04/28/2007 11:41:25 AM |
| not much to it and you missed the thirds. I don't understand the caption or the purpose of the picture |
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04/27/2007 03:33:58 PM |
| this has a nice sense of minimalism. i love the repetition of the colour and pattern of the jar on the ground. |
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04/27/2007 12:42:39 AM |
| main subject needs to be in sharp focus |
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04/26/2007 11:58:49 PM |
| The color seems off a bit, and out of focus some. |
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04/25/2007 08:45:57 PM |
| For me, this photo is just too much of the same thing - two colors (back wall & jar lid brown and asphalt and jar/contents grey). The composition is good. It is an interesting picture, but not one you'd want to look at again and again - if that makes any sense. |
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04/25/2007 01:19:14 AM |
| The post in the corner is very distracting and the subject is a little boring. |
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