| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/08/2007 01:00:16 PM |
Thanks for the feedback guys, glad you got a laugh out of it and I enjoyed doing this one :)
Originally wanted to have a shot of a rumpled bed at the bottom, but couldn't get one that really worked when the image was small, same for the middle shot which I planned to be a candle-lit dinner setting but that got lost when it was made to fit in a triptych size. Ah well, live and learn :)
|
|
|
|
05/07/2007 12:35:31 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Very humorous progression you chose there. :)
Compositionally, each of the shots is strong on their own, individually, and they work together to tell an interesting story. Maybe the phone number should have been 867-5309 (though you may be too young to understand that). The undies in the bottom look too much like an advertisement and not like they just got dropped (though I'm glad you used apparently clean ones). Maybe if they were a bit more "ruffled" and on something besides a white backdrop it would seem a bit more real.
Technically, the focus is right on. There are no distracting oof spots (not that everything oof is distracting, but if there is enough of it, it can be) and the lighting is even throughout the series. They seem a bit drab to me, though, as if there could be a bit more brightness added to the colors to make them *pop*. A slight boost in contrast may do that as well.
Overall, good work, and thanks for the chuckle.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
karma |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
05/06/2007 05:51:43 PM |
| An interesting idea. The photos could be a little sharper, and the undies come off (excude the pun) as too staged. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/06/2007 06:02:13 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2007 11:38:43 PM |
| Nicely told story. funny. 7 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2007 05:00:38 AM |
| Interesting and tells a story - nice job. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2007 08:53:18 PM |
| HAHAHAH omg that is a good idea. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 05:04:21 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 03:07:45 PM |
| What the hell were you drinking? Good story in three pictures though. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 12:46:34 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 12:00:03 PM |
| One thing leads to another. Neat idea. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/02/2007 11:32:06 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2007 11:35:19 PM |
| HAHAHA! Gotta love this picture! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2007 08:46:52 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2007 07:54:15 AM |
| Cute... I called but couldn't get the communication... just a joke.... well done... lol |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2007 02:35:05 AM |
| Great storytelling, nice pics. :) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 09:09:15 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
