| Author | Thread |
|
|
07/25/2008 03:10:17 PM |
| beautiful find, love how immersed she is |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/06/2007 02:41:59 PM |
so many layers so compactly fit together, it would have been interesting without a subject.
emer |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/08/2007 10:59:50 AM |
| You have a good eye to arrange this photo like you did. I love it. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2007 07:29:19 PM |
| I love the perspective on this one. It projects the viewer into a seat on the bus such that we are sitting in the seat across from and one seat over from this girl. We take a glance to see who is across from us and what they are doing. Tones are good. I wonder if you could have used a higher f-stop and/or slower shutter speed and captured the subject, the interior of the bus AND some details of what is outside the bus. At times I don't like the blown out light coming through the windows and other times I think that it is perfectly suited for this photograph because it is what is on the inside that is our main subject and one does not want to busy the scene to distract away from that. One critique I do have though that I think would greatly improve the composition is to crop off the top 1/3 of the photo. That is just empty space that is doing nothing for the overall composition. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2007 01:48:51 AM |
| I didn't get a chance to comment on this photo earlier, but it is a truly amazing photo. Everything here just feels right: the mood, the lighting, the composition, and the scene. A very special photo. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2007 09:20:22 PM |
| Ah, just wonderful! What a refreshing capture and beautiful sense of motion. You raised the bar pretty high on this one :-) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2007 07:16:53 PM |
| great perspective - looks like "I" am peeking around my seat |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2007 12:40:43 AM |
| ok how did you get yourself on a school bus? great shot..great pp |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 09:16:35 PM |
| Wow - I love this. The bus ceiling, the old seats the girl - all fantastic. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 08:32:41 PM |
| i like it more when i really look at it |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 07:16:27 AM |
| I really like this image VERY much - and the treatment you've given it is so apt! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 06:51:27 AM |
Great shot, Exposure control is perfect, and the seats to the right just seem to frame her tight enough in 'her own little world'.
Love it. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/03/2007 05:38:15 AM |
| Wow, this is great, and what great timing to capture the young girl inbetween the seats like that.....Very clever..... |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/02/2007 10:23:14 PM |
| The composition is perfect. I like how she is squeezed imbetween the lines of the seat. Great story. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/02/2007 09:47:16 PM |
| Makes me feel like I'm sitting there, across the aisle. Conveys well ordinary life, going about its business. Good tones, I might have cropped much of the ceiling part of the bus out (right about where the ceiling curves off), to keep the eye from traveling too far toward the top of the image, away from the empty seat focal point. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/02/2007 09:42:08 PM |
| love the composition, very nice. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/01/2025 07:04:08 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
