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AlmightySun
AlmightySun
anandpaithankar


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Challenge: Vanishing Point II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot SD630 / IXUS 65
Location: Baner, Pune
Date: May 12, 2007
Aperture: f/4.9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Date Uploaded: May 14, 2007

The one and only Sun almighty on the unending Horizon.

Statistics
Place: 185 out of 195
Avg (all users): 4.2512
Avg (commenters): 4.1667
Avg (participants): 3.9242
Avg (non-participants): 4.4000
Views since voting: 650
Views during voting: 281
Votes: 211
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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05/23/2007 10:24:33 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Greetings and welcome to dpc!

As a photograph, this is a very intriguing image. I like the simple but strong imagery portrayed with the orange sky, sun, and city skyline. The brightness of the sun is balanced with the vastness of the sky, and I think that makes for a fairly strong and balanced composition. It feels a bit tight on the left, so if there was a bit more space on that side it may help. Also, I think having the sky take up so much space, and the city so little, is effective. A more distinct skyline might have made for more interest though.

For this challenge, I can see that the sun is a "vanishing point" in a literal sense of the phrase. However, in photography, it typically describes a scene that has parallel lines running to a point where it looks like they meet, or will meet. In that respect, it is difficult to distinguish how this meets the challenge, and I think that is probably what hurt your score the most.

If I need to further explain or clarify myself, please feel free to contact me.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/20/2007 01:35:55 PM
I don't think this is what's meant by "vanishing point".
05/19/2007 12:27:20 PM
Parallel lines? Vanishing point?
05/17/2007 07:27:42 PM
DNMC...I don't see any converging lines anywhere? Care to help me out here?
05/16/2007 11:21:49 AM
DNMC
05/16/2007 09:04:05 AM
CREATIVE!!!! a 10 for being different.
05/16/2007 01:10:33 AM
Not much evidence of a vanishing point here


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