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01/01/2004 12:37:51 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi! This is a lovely overall shot and I originally gave it a 7 during the challenge.
What threw me off initially in the challange and still does now is the cropping to start. I'm guessing you were going for the rules of 1/3 with the off center crop and I think it would work very well if the center of the flower was more to the right and down just a hair.
You said you only adjusted the brightness but I wonder if you did anything with the coloration also because of the blue tint that is coming across on my monitor. Or was that the lighting that you used? I like the tint, it's very surreal which really works with this shot.
The border is unique but also a bit distracting to me personally. Also while the shot is sharp, it's coming across with a very soft focus and the white area above the bud is a bit overbright to me. Perhaps a different angle so it's a leave behind the buds?
I hope this helps and should you decide to do any of the changes I offered I would love to see the redone work! But it is a great shot as is!
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further! |
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12/28/2003 08:24:47 PM |
| I can't vote, but I'd give this a 10. Well done. |
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12/27/2003 08:53:43 PM |
| High-key is tricky (at least I've never gotten it right!), and here I think the problem is that the center looks like it has lots of shadows, only they are over-exposed. A good high-key shot can have dark shadows, only they can't cover significant portions of the image. Anyway, great composition, and I rather like the frame. |
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12/27/2003 11:29:57 AM |
| What a gorgeous high-key effect. The misty feeling fits the subject well. |
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12/24/2003 03:36:04 PM |
| This border rocks! How did you do it? |
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12/24/2003 12:12:23 PM |
| Good concept and nicely done. Did not vote down for the "artsy" border but felt is was distracting. |
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12/24/2003 06:13:00 AM |
| A lovely and interesting shot with a very nice "art" feel to it that appeals to me. Excellent composition. |
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12/23/2003 09:28:45 AM |
Technical: fits the challenge. Exposure composition focus lighting all good. I think the DOF works nicely with the placement of the subject.
Personal: For me this is a little overdone with the color and the border. I'm sure others will love it though.
My vote: 6 |
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12/23/2003 09:25:42 AM |
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12/22/2003 09:20:22 AM |
| Too washed out for my tastes. |
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12/22/2003 12:24:36 AM |
| I love these white on white shot, they are so delicate, and this one is no exception, the lighting is wonderful and you captured the detail perfectly, 10 |
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