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08/09/2007 09:13:26 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, I think the people on the left side of the frame and the emptiness of the right contrast nicely with eachother. The only mildly disconcerting part is that at first glance, it almost looks like a woman with four legs and arms. :/ This is interesting once you realize what you are looking at, but upon first glance it may have put some people off.
Technically, the lighting is a bit harsh, but it is understandable. It really makes the colors *pop* and emphasizes their brightness. Also, again, the colors are very nice, and really attract the viewer's attention to the shot.
Overall, I think it is an interesting shot.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
Best to you in future challenges,
Karma |
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08/05/2007 08:25:56 PM |
| I like the action happening here and the possible stories one could imagine on what they might be talking about: is she asking for directions, or is this an argument; are they breaking up? |
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08/05/2007 12:15:26 AM |
| dynamic composition and having him be "lost" in her seems to have metaphorical implications. |
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08/03/2007 12:53:52 PM |
| Nice colorfull image. psart |
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08/03/2007 01:45:10 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background very good,
Technical: Focus, Exposure: good
Appeal:colourful tells a story
Total Averaged Rating 7 |
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07/31/2007 02:43:16 AM |
| Nice capture - Like the harsh lighting and interesting poses |
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07/30/2007 10:56:31 AM |
| I would have liked to see the face of the second person. |
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07/30/2007 10:55:17 AM |
| wish we could see a face here, that would help tell more of a story. |
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07/30/2007 02:56:09 AM |
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07/30/2007 12:27:33 AM |
| Great story. I like how their legs overlap. The light is a touch harsh but I love the colors. |
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