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Dreaming Bird of Paradise
Dreaming Bird of Paradise
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Negative Space (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot G2
Location: work
Date: Sep 10, 2002
Aperture: 6.3
ISO: 50
Shutter: 3/10ths
Date Uploaded: Sep 11, 2002

Bird of Paradise against a stripped balloon.
Macro shot.

Statistics
Place: 151 out of 218
Avg (all users): 4.7740
Avg (commenters): 4.8621
Avg (participants): 4.5310
Avg (non-participants): 4.9719
Views since voting: 1109
Votes: 323
Comments: 32
Favorites: 1 (view)


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09/23/2002 05:33:00 AM
Focus - first of all this is a lovely picture. I scored it a 9 - the colours and interest struck me about it. I believe, though, that you've fallen into the subjectivity trap. I mean that because you know what the picture is of you can easily discern what is what. Personally I had to work fairly hard to figure out what was what in your picture. I enjoyed the journey and I love that your negative space is as colourful as your positive space. But aparrently not everyone enjoys or even undertakes that journey. As photoraphers I think we need to either accept that many people will not understand our shot or else add extra visual clues about what is what. I had the same problem with my own "Caught Napping" shot - //www.dpchallenge.com/image.asp?IMAGE_ID=5118
09/23/2002 12:54:00 AM
Yours was the first picture I looked for to see how it had rated. I can't believe that just a beautiful picture was overlooked.
09/23/2002 12:21:00 AM
"Negative Space," as I understood it and as discussed in several forums here, is the space where the subject is not. We also discussed that negative space is not necessarily blank space. The subject is readily discernable and removeable from this picture. That it was colorful seems have rated this low. I am very appreciative that a number of you enjoyed the picture anyway.

Just in case there is any question, I am not the least bit hurt or upset. I cannot begin to say how much I have learned by being an active member. Not only about photography, but about myself and how others perceive my work. Thank you all for your feedback.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/22/2002 08:39:00 PM
Not sure of 'negative space' but a beautiful picture all the same...
09/22/2002 08:13:00 AM
Negative space?
09/21/2002 11:55:00 PM
Nice colors. You seem to have an interpretation of negative space i have not seen. I am interesting in hearing about it. 5 -- karmat
09/21/2002 05:46:00 PM
I wish there was more differentiation between foreground and background, either in tonal values or focus or both.
09/21/2002 10:06:00 AM
the foreground purple piece is distracting because its out of focus lovely colours
09/21/2002 01:49:00 AM
I like the colors in this one. The front purple leave is a little out of focus. The colors are way good. 5
09/20/2002 03:04:00 PM
Good colors, no negative space.
09/20/2002 02:47:00 PM
great color composition.

Um, where is the neg space?
09/19/2002 07:52:00 PM
Lovely colors but I don't see the negative space?
09/19/2002 08:19:00 AM
Either theres no subject or there is no NS...nice color...1
09/19/2002 05:28:00 AM
A little too busy methinks
09/19/2002 01:33:00 AM
This is such a lovely colourful picture, I keep on thinking about it and I am raising the initial vote I gave you. Well done, fantastic picture, everthing seems perfect.
09/18/2002 08:02:00 AM
Just LOVE this photograph. One of my favorite flowers & your use of color is superb!
09/18/2002 04:13:00 AM
Very nice shot but sorry I do not see the challenge here ... an other week 7, this week 4. But I like the colors a lot .. I do not usually like flower pictures because they are too 'conventional' to me .. but I like this one a lot. Lionel
09/18/2002 02:50:00 AM
love all the colors - sharp and crisp
09/18/2002 01:01:00 AM
nice picture but what about the negative space?
09/18/2002 12:31:00 AM
This has beautiful color everywhere but my eyes are having a problem trying to see the foreground and background at the same time.
09/17/2002 03:43:00 PM
Beautiful. Would score highly with me in another challenge. This time, not so, because it doesn't have any negative space for me (under my own definition, I appreciate your mileage may vary;)
5, Kavey
09/16/2002 11:55:00 PM
nice.
09/16/2002 10:16:00 PM
Fantastic colors. A really beautiful shot. But I have to wonder what you consider negative space.
09/16/2002 06:53:00 PM
Very nice. But where is the negative?
09/16/2002 06:18:00 PM
this is very nice , I just don't see the subject... therefore there is no apparent - space...
09/16/2002 04:36:00 PM
Where's the negative space? Too much going on all over the image
09/16/2002 03:29:00 PM
The colors are magnificent and wonderful clarity!
09/16/2002 03:08:00 PM
i'm sorry, but i don't see this as a negative space picture, there's entirely too much going on throughout the whole photo. as for the photo itself, i love the colors, it's borderline abstract, but you can recognize it. very nice. i would probably try and crop out the bud at the top right, and (if that's possible w/out loosing too much of the photo) the purple leaf at the bottom right. definitely the bud though. -- gr8photos.
09/16/2002 02:57:00 PM
Very rich, vibrancy here.
09/16/2002 02:14:00 PM
I'm failing to see ANY non-positive space here. There appears to eb a positive lack of negative space! 2 Jak
09/16/2002 04:51:00 AM
Composition: very busy I dont know what represents negative space 4
Lighting: good 5,
Appeal: 5, Total Rating 5 Sulamk
09/16/2002 02:48:00 AM
This is a beautiful photo but i'm lost on the negative space concept here... - jmsetzler


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