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02/08/2004 11:39:04 AM |
| Wowww I almost didn't see this one ... perfect focus in the brush ... love it, love it love it ... 10 from me. |
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02/07/2004 01:32:22 AM |
| I think the shallow depth of field didn't work out for this shot. |
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02/06/2004 03:49:40 PM |
| great idea maybe cropped a little too close but very clever |
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02/05/2004 02:19:50 PM |
| I think this is good, but might be better if the ink were less dominant and the marks on the paper were less obscured. |
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02/04/2004 02:13:45 AM |
| looks more of Paper and Brush, a higher DoF would help |
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02/03/2004 09:08:39 PM |
Very impressive use of DOF! Really makes you focus on the brush and the immediate surrounding brush strokes on the paper.
Two minor things I would have fixed:
1. Small miscellaneous dot on the downstroke on the left.
2. Tighter cropping on the left side to eliminate the gray corner in the lower left.
One thing I may have done differently:
Place the bottle behind the brush or brushstrokes and still apply DOF. |
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02/02/2004 11:38:32 PM |
| I realize you want the bottle out of focus, but I think it may have gone a bit too far. Good idea and good setup. |
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02/02/2004 07:49:36 PM |
| Too bad the ink bottle is out of focus, nice effect. |
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02/02/2004 09:33:54 AM |
| nicely composed, but I don't care for the out of focus inkwell being in the foreground. I think it distracts from the subject. I like shallow DOF, but would tend to place the secondary objects in the back so they do not dominate the image. |
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02/02/2004 09:03:02 AM |
| The ink bottle looks blurred - my attention goes to the bottle and it's a little distracting. |
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02/02/2004 07:50:07 AM |
| I don't like how the bottle is out of focus and I feel this image would look cleaner with a white tone, rather than the current yellowish one it has |
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02/02/2004 02:31:23 AM |
| The level of sharpening used really upsets the overall feel. The brights stand out too much, especially noticable on the handle of the brush. Nice idea, though. 5 |
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