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02/07/2004 01:07:23 PM |
I started to do a shot very similar to this, but was too lazy to go outside and get a rock. hahah
Photographically, I think your shot comes up a little short because it is so "flat." A lower perspective and filling the frame more with the rock and scissors would have really helped, I think. Wrinkling the paper adds interest and texture to it, but it is composed in such a way to look "static." I find my eyes pulled to the outside black border, away from the subject.
This shot has a lot of potential, I think. Perhaps composing it so that the scissors are closer to the rock, the paper provides the entire background, and the whole thing is more vertical than horizontal would ahve really made it pop. Of course, it is just my opinion, so ymmv. Good luck. |
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02/07/2004 02:47:32 AM |
wow! i though i was the only one who would of thought of this combination, it would have turned out better if you put them in some sort of heirarchy, paper above the rocks, rock looming above scissors but yours is composed well nonetheless. |
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02/06/2004 12:52:49 AM |
didn't the challenge say TWO things that go together? but a very nice photo |
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02/05/2004 01:20:53 AM |
Appears to be overly sharp in the scissors but soft on the rest. The joys of photographing metal...
TC |
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02/04/2004 01:19:49 AM |
different and good composition |
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02/03/2004 08:06:47 PM |
Veru creative idea. One not duplicated in the challenge which hard to do these days. I think it could have been a bit sharper tho. 8 |
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02/03/2004 05:59:37 AM |
Original idea. This picture has potential. It seems a little flat. Maybe a different camera angle or tweaking the set up would have improved the final image. Just my opinion. :) |
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02/02/2004 09:23:50 PM |
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02/02/2004 08:54:58 PM |
I love the texture of the paper! Very creative selection! |
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02/02/2004 07:53:46 PM |
Good, original idea. 8 (I'll be back) |
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02/02/2004 06:58:02 PM |
Three things vs. two... I know picky..... |
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02/02/2004 06:29:11 PM |
Three things that definitly go together. Only one who thought o fthis idea too. |
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02/02/2004 12:44:32 PM |
I wanted to do this with hands. Glad I didn't. Good composition . |
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02/02/2004 11:55:59 AM |
Hehe original ... very good and funny ... only thing you could have done better is getting a better stone ... bbut this will do for an 9 from me |
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02/02/2004 08:52:54 AM |
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02/02/2004 07:29:20 AM |
creative! Good idea to crumple the paper - adds a nice texture. Small nit but the stone's not quite lit right |
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02/02/2004 03:10:50 AM |
I really like the border you created using the paper ontop of a black backing. Neat. A cute idea. 7 |
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02/02/2004 02:01:54 AM |
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