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09/15/2007 12:19:05 PM |
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Interesting photo that works well in b/w. Layout of the poster is fine. What really holds this back is the lack of any clear message. What is it you are motivating people to do? Shred? Use less paper? |
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09/09/2007 03:07:36 AM |
Interesting idea, nice poster. |
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09/08/2007 07:52:19 PM |
For me, this isn't all that motivational, but I think this is a fun photo to look at. I think the b&w works well. |
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09/08/2007 06:57:40 AM |
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09/06/2007 03:06:25 PM |
Neat thought but not sure it motivates me. |
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09/03/2007 11:30:17 PM |
I'm not sure how this is meant to motivate me into stopping bureaucracy, but it is interesting. Something a bit different. |
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09/03/2007 10:44:02 PM |
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09/03/2007 12:44:54 PM |
It's hard to tell for sure with a B/W photo, but red paper tape might be more effective than white paper strips to show bureaucracy. I'm not sure what this is suggesting, that we shred paper to tame it and overcome bureaucracy? |
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09/03/2007 12:27:48 PM |
very creative approach. good shot, only the bright top right corner distracts. Typeface is not too well chosen, a straight, clear font or typewriter font would have worked better. |
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