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09/09/2007 03:05:34 AM |
| Softness is distracting, maybe a tighter crop would have been better IMO,but not a bad poster. |
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09/04/2007 09:11:50 AM |
| I find the person at the bottom left distracts from the image. |
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09/03/2007 09:57:56 PM |
| Strange but interesting. I'm intrigued by the person sitting outside left of frame. You must have left them there for a reason, I'm just trying to figure out why.... |
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09/03/2007 03:55:04 PM |
| I think you either forgot the "s" after produce or missed a ":" after Yoga. For a clear bright mind I would hope for a clear, bright picture without fog and all the distractions in the sand. The horizon may be intentionally crooked, but it takes away from the strong, capable phrase. This has a lot of potential, but with the above issues I can't vote it highly. Now with her in the same pose on a sunny day without stuff in the sand I'd rate it much higher. |
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09/03/2007 04:55:41 AM |
The model's pose is excellent, the location is excellent and they fit the message.
Unfortunately the clothes on the beach are a distraction and the image looks flat. |
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09/03/2007 04:17:35 AM |
| Lacks focus and contrast. The elements on the left side do not add to the composition and make it look as a snapshot. Sorry |
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09/03/2007 02:04:20 AM |
| i don't know about this...if your trying to convey a clear bright mind...wouldn't you want the picture to be clear as well? |
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09/03/2007 12:39:07 AM |
| I suggest the phrasing is too banal to be motivational- it's more of a commercial message. Secondly, why use a hazy shot to illustrate the "clear, bright" idea? |
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