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Challenge: Motivational Poster II (Advanced Editing V*)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE 7
Lens: Konica Minolta 24-85mm f/3.5-4.5 MZ
Location: Chatham, MA
Date: Aug 31, 2007
Aperture: f/5.90
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/128
Galleries: Emotive, Action
Date Uploaded: Aug 31, 2007

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Statistics
Place: 162 out of 165
Avg (all users): 4.1283
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 3.9701
Avg (non-participants): 4.2167
Views since voting: 1212
Views during voting: 381
Votes: 187
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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09/09/2007 03:05:34 AM
Softness is distracting, maybe a tighter crop would have been better IMO,but not a bad poster.
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09/04/2007 09:11:50 AM
I find the person at the bottom left distracts from the image.
09/03/2007 09:57:56 PM
Strange but interesting. I'm intrigued by the person sitting outside left of frame. You must have left them there for a reason, I'm just trying to figure out why....
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/03/2007 03:55:04 PM
I think you either forgot the "s" after produce or missed a ":" after Yoga. For a clear bright mind I would hope for a clear, bright picture without fog and all the distractions in the sand. The horizon may be intentionally crooked, but it takes away from the strong, capable phrase. This has a lot of potential, but with the above issues I can't vote it highly. Now with her in the same pose on a sunny day without stuff in the sand I'd rate it much higher.
09/03/2007 04:55:41 AM
The model's pose is excellent, the location is excellent and they fit the message.

Unfortunately the clothes on the beach are a distraction and the image looks flat.
09/03/2007 04:17:35 AM
Lacks focus and contrast. The elements on the left side do not add to the composition and make it look as a snapshot. Sorry
09/03/2007 02:04:20 AM
i don't know about this...if your trying to convey a clear bright mind...wouldn't you want the picture to be clear as well?
09/03/2007 12:39:07 AM
I suggest the phrasing is too banal to be motivational- it's more of a commercial message. Secondly, why use a hazy shot to illustrate the "clear, bright" idea?
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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