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09/22/2007 10:59:35 AM |
Critique Club feedback -
This is a nice entry that meets the challenge well. Looks like you spent a good bit of time laying out your 'props' with an eye for detail, and it paid off.
The composition is interesting, though I find all the leading lines keep moving my eye quickly past the plate and on to that coffee cup.
The lighting is good, though the processing appears to have pulled the image back towards the dark side of things overall and the contrast is also slightly heavy.
Again, its the attention to detail that really sets this shot apart. The sprinkles on the milk, the placing of the strawberry - really great. About the only thing missing here is a salt shaker full of chocolate powder and I think I'd be licking my screen! |
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09/16/2007 10:39:58 PM |
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09/15/2007 09:42:37 PM |
| Life is short - eat dessert first! I like the idea, but it seems a bit dark (my CRT monitor is calibrated). |
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09/14/2007 08:40:37 PM |
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09/14/2007 11:37:26 AM |
| That is my kind of dinner! Very nicely executed, so which utensil is the candy utensil? |
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09/13/2007 09:27:35 PM |
| the idea is great. to be a real good shot, IMHO you would need to reduce the picture to the essentials. THe way it is, it's too busy. May bejust showing the plate with a fork pushed into a praline,...remove all the other silvcerware, glas, cup. focus on what's important |
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09/10/2007 10:31:16 PM |
| well done...I like the comp. It could be a little sharper. |
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09/10/2007 09:52:01 PM |
| very solid still life - good lighting - interesting details - but I almost think there is just a little too many items - Are you having coffee or the after dinner drink? Do you need all the flatware when it is dessert? |
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09/10/2007 09:39:12 PM |
Great scene, lighting is a little dark for my taste but could be this monitor...
Great job.
-dave |
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09/10/2007 08:35:48 PM |
| I think a little more light on the subject would help. Maybe an off white or neutral plate and cup. |
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09/10/2007 06:51:23 PM |
| Yummy! The flatware seems like it could have been shinny instead of dulling the image. I understand you might not want the distraction either. |
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09/10/2007 12:25:44 PM |
| Nice dinner! Great idea and composition. |
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09/10/2007 10:24:30 AM |
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09/10/2007 04:43:43 AM |
| nice set up. well lit. I like the green and red touches to break the brown. |
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09/10/2007 02:43:56 AM |
| Really cute idea! Looks like waffles, scrambled eggs, bacon and toast, complete with a green garnish!!! Well done! |
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09/10/2007 02:08:06 AM |
| Nice set up! The lighting is a little flat - I would have liked it to POP a little more. |
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