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10/27/2007 03:16:57 PM |
| Very nice portrait - I like the highlight lighting on her hair. |
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10/10/2007 07:58:26 AM |
What a beautiful model, and what a beautiful smile.
She will be very proud of this fine portraitm, I am sure.
I also love the lighting very much. |
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10/06/2007 09:58:28 PM |
| The portrait is pleasing, but the wide, white border with the thin brown border around it is very distracting. Also, the merger of the model's sleeve with the frame on our left should really have been avoided. |
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10/05/2007 11:23:59 AM |
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10/03/2007 10:34:44 PM |
| This is a great portrait. Your control of light is very good and your model is beautiful. Frame/crop is nic, and the vignette is a nice touch. 8 |
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10/03/2007 10:14:48 PM |
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10/03/2007 06:02:41 PM |
| PLeasant portrait. Maybe a bit soft in focus but not bad. The cropped top of the head is a bit odd and the outer border really isnt good for this image. 7 |
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10/02/2007 08:59:38 PM |
| Great pose for this lovely young girl, I love the hair and the lighting, only complaint, and its just a small one is that perhaps you lightened her teeth to much, they don't look quite natural while the rest of her is so naturally pretty. 8 |
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10/02/2007 05:23:57 PM |
| i like how your border looks like it is in a picture frame. imo the hair in front of her eye takes a little bit away from her portrait. |
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10/02/2007 01:32:37 PM |
| Cute photo - I like her smile. The white border detracts a bit and makes the photo to look "squished" in to me. |
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10/02/2007 01:13:59 PM |
Good portrait, I think the light from the right is a bot too harsh compared to the fill light on the left. And the whites of the eyes are overprocessed.
Focus is good and a natural looking capture. |
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10/01/2007 11:04:54 AM |
| Nice side lighting on this. It might be even stronger if her teeth weren't so white (they draw the attention away from the eyes). |
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10/01/2007 08:37:13 AM |
| Nice honest portrait. I wish her hair wasn't covering the eye to our right. Not loving the frame. I'd remove the brown border. She's lovely. |
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10/01/2007 08:29:32 AM |
| Lovely well done portrait. Has nice light from the side, nothing blown, clean whites of the eye (I've accepted that people prefer them that way, but I still like "normal" eyes), nice natural smile. About the only thing I might suggest you'd have done differently is not have a top with a design on it. Nice work. |
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