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11/07/2007 08:53:52 PM |
| What eyes! Pretty eyes make the sale with me. I also like the blowing hair. |
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11/04/2007 07:17:21 AM |
| Just waiting for the rule of thirds critics to come in ;) Nice shot, could use a little more vibrance/saturation and color cast removal. 5 |
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11/04/2007 07:15:15 AM |
| Perhaps a tighter crop (left and bottom) may have made this a stronger image. Good focus and nice expression. The pose is nice but I just noticed she has her fingers on the chords, yet the other hand is not playing, so perhaps relaxing that hand - but minor and, may have ended up too 'directed'. |
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11/04/2007 04:47:08 AM |
| Needs more colour balancing... I'm not sure the white balance was good here. Lots of empty negative space to the left, not a very convincing composition. Why form a chord with the left hand if the right hand is posing for the camera? A bit of a mixed message there. Nice model, you've not flattered her ankle and you should generally aim not to see the bottom of the feet in a portrait. Have you come across rule of thirds? That will help you. Nice shallow dof, good bokeh. |
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11/03/2007 12:50:23 AM |
| Your yellow background has more emphasis than your subject... |
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11/02/2007 11:16:40 PM |
| ay, senorita! Juegame una cancion...del amor! |
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11/02/2007 08:25:58 PM |
| A good pose and camera angle. The background is too busy, though and the positioning in the frame is too centred. I think a closer crop would help. I can imagine the guitar almost filling the frame. |
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11/01/2007 10:46:53 PM |
| beautiful subject, would've liked her not so centred 6 |
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11/01/2007 09:43:48 AM |
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