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02/24/2004 11:03:49 AM |
| Too much info for me. Try getting tighter. |
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02/23/2004 05:03:28 PM |
| I like the idea, but the execution leaves a little to be desired. Needs greater DOF and I don't think B&W was the way to go here. |
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02/22/2004 12:36:23 AM |
| Wish the lighting was a bit better. I like the crumbs on the plate. Too dark. Good idea. |
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02/21/2004 11:52:40 PM |
| Would like a little more light on the toast. |
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02/21/2004 07:26:36 AM |
| This shot shouldn't be so.. appetizing to me.. I guess I am underfed. 7 |
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02/20/2004 11:03:56 PM |
| dry, bland, and blurry. Very nice lighting and composition however. I think you should have submitted this to mundane, it would have done much better! |
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02/20/2004 11:19:22 AM |
| Nice capture of the texture of toast. I think black and white was a good choice for this picture - color would have distracted from the texture. |
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02/20/2004 01:31:09 AM |
| I think would have been better if you have focused the top one. The light a little too strong. Nice texture and ... I really need some water... It looks too dry |
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02/20/2004 12:43:54 AM |
| Nice shot, interesting texture of the bread. Good lighting. |
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02/19/2004 12:40:50 PM |
| The texture is here. The subject and composition lack interest to me. I don't like the lighting with the strong shadows and whiteness in the bottom right. |
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02/19/2004 11:47:52 AM |
| a bit less shadow and a bit more contrast needed IMO |
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02/19/2004 10:12:20 AM |
| Strange crop, just between a close crop and a wide one, not for my taste at least. Maybe it would be better to focus on the top of the toast to get the texture "out of it". Good DOF. |
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02/19/2004 06:01:48 AM |
| Nice photo. The crumbs on th eplate distract from the "Perfect Image" |
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02/18/2004 07:06:27 PM |
| I can taste the dry! Would like to see a bigger dof and the lighting brought up a notch to see more of the texture inthe bread. |
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02/18/2004 06:28:47 PM |
| I think the lighting and crop are hurting your shot. The focus is okay but either more light or closer to the toast. The table on the lower right is a distraction. This is a good entry and I hope you do well. |
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02/18/2004 02:06:31 PM |
| Dry toast, why didn't I think of that. Anyway maybe a close up and a cool angle would've been really great. |
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02/18/2004 07:09:25 AM |
| Very very dry. With such an ordinary subject, so very mundane, I think the lighting needs to be extraordinary to give some punch: your light here is perfectly competent, the raking angle of it really shows the surface of the toast (and that puts you in the higher marks so far alone). Somehow you haven't really photographed that surface though - the concentration of the image isn't there enough. Sorry this is impressionistic, but then some criticism is. |
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02/18/2004 01:44:17 AM |
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02/18/2004 12:45:38 AM |
| Color may have helped out with this shot. |
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