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11/28/2007 05:19:40 PM |
| Reading over the comments people made... um... people are critical here. haha. Good idea, but it does look like a snap shot. keep trying!! |
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11/27/2007 12:34:25 AM |
| You need to work on the lighting. It looks too snapshottish like this. Too busy also. |
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11/26/2007 06:28:52 PM |
| somewhat out of focus. The perspective is interesting. |
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11/26/2007 06:25:02 PM |
| doesn't hit the spot for me |
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11/25/2007 09:55:29 PM |
| Very busy photo, and that blue light to the right of the photo keeps drawing my eye. |
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11/25/2007 09:29:35 PM |
| I feel that this image lacks real inspiration . . .I would have loved to have seen more of the subjects face. |
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11/25/2007 10:35:29 AM |
| Two things could improve this. First, correct the whitebalance so the hideous yellow cast of the indoor lighting would go away. Second, how about shooting this from an angle that doesn't leave me with the impression that the photographer simply walked up behind this girl and took a snapshot? Seeing her face would be nice, or really any other angle that gave me a more intimate view of the person studying. I feel like someone passing through the hallway and glancing into a dorm room. |
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11/24/2007 08:43:08 PM |
| THIS IS WHAT I CALL WORKING!! |
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11/23/2007 12:46:47 PM |
| you could have shown her face. |
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11/22/2007 11:34:34 AM |
| Save shots like these for myspace, there's nothing 'beautiful' or evocative about this. |
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11/22/2007 07:06:47 AM |
Technicals: 0.5/2 - no clear focus, yellowish cast, undefined DOF
Composition: 0/2 - snapshottish, no effort on composition or lighting visible
Challenge Relation: 1.5/2
Originality/Creativity: 0/2
Overall Impact: 0/2
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11/21/2007 09:02:20 AM |
| Great idea. She really looks like she's studying. The white balance seems off, and it appears to lack sharpness. |
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