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Surabaya, Navy Base
Surabaya, Navy Base
prkemby


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Your Corner of the World (Classic Editing)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 2500
Location: on a ferry at Madura strait
Date: Sep 22, 2002
Aperture: f/4.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/1538
Date Uploaded: Sep 22, 2002

Surabaya, is the navy base for Eastern Indonesia. Took this pic on a ferry to Madura island. Adjusted the levels and sharpened using Photoshop 7

Statistics
Place: 198 out of 245
Avg (all users): 4.6776
Avg (commenters): 5.5000
Avg (participants): 4.7089
Avg (non-participants): 4.6438
Views since voting: 1686
Votes: 304
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/29/2002 09:34:00 PM
Initial=Wow! that statue is huge!
Composition=good
Clarity (focus, details)=needs improvement
Exposure=fair
Interesting or Emotive=interesting to look at

I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks
autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments.
Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0)
kpb
09/29/2002 02:23:00 PM
A little soft, and horizon line is not straight.
09/29/2002 10:43:00 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 7,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
09/28/2002 03:13:00 AM
the statue is neat, but the rest of the shot seems uninteresting. Also quality seems to be an issue, perhaps the picture was oversharpened. 3
09/27/2002 11:24:00 AM
If this was a bit sharper would be a much better pic
09/26/2002 09:23:00 PM
A 10 had it been straight...followed the challenge IMO
09/26/2002 01:37:00 AM
Interesting pic, but the large antenna competes for attention and directs the eye up and out of the picture.
09/25/2002 11:46:00 PM
Photo is a little out of focus. The water line is not level (camera tilted to the right).
09/25/2002 03:48:00 PM
my shutterbug pal's always telling me to watch for vertical lines, but the tower ain't all that offensive. it does make me wonder what's at the top, too bad it's cut off. i guess the details in the foreground would've gotten lost if you'd exposed for the sky any more. although the statue and ships might look really cool as silhouettes against a colorful sky.
09/24/2002 02:53:00 PM
Neat compostion. The antennae is a little "unfortunate". Seems a little soft in focus. 5 chakkobbo
09/23/2002 10:27:00 PM
I think I would have tried to choose one of these elements as the main subject. As it is, the ships (which are cool!) are competing a bit with the statue (which is a little less cool, but still cool :). I may have considered focusing more on the ships as an interesting subject.
09/23/2002 07:27:00 PM
That's either a bunch of toy boats or that statue is huge!!
09/23/2002 02:37:00 PM
Wow that statue is huge!!! Fun to see this, thanks. Good luck Justine
09/23/2002 06:25:00 AM
I'm sure it must be the lens angle but the statue seems to be leaning to the right.
09/23/2002 03:47:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!


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