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01/08/2008 03:18:01 PM |
| Would have been scored higher if cropped more from left side. Subject is too centered. Wouldn't take much off, just a bit from left side. Hot spots on face are distracting. Love the flare at the base of the sword. |
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01/08/2008 01:29:12 PM |
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01/07/2008 07:32:23 PM |
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01/05/2008 09:41:18 AM |
| the fire kind of looks like an afterthought |
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01/04/2008 11:04:56 PM |
| I like the idea (not just fire like in many other entries :), but I think execution can be improved: maybe shallow depth of filed to separate from background, or even different background to make fire "more visible"; lighting of her face can be better |
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01/04/2008 04:15:10 PM |
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01/04/2008 03:06:27 PM |
| Very cool idea. A bit too bright in a few places. |
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01/04/2008 11:30:57 AM |
| I like the flaming sword, but not sure a pretty girl assasin and shiny leaves go with the concept very well. Seems to dampen the drama. |
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01/03/2008 06:03:07 PM |
| Lighting is a little harsh on her skin and the sword. |
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01/03/2008 07:46:31 AM |
| It's a good idea, but to do it in bright daylight wasn't a good move. A much darker and less distracting background would have improved this a great deal. |
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01/02/2008 02:57:41 PM |
| I would have liked a different crop or angle to this. It feels too much like a snapshot. Also, the glare off the sword is a little bit distracting. But besides that this is a great picture. The fire looks great! |
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01/02/2008 01:24:19 PM |
| i think the concept is poor somehow |
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01/02/2008 09:40:33 AM |
| The glare on the blade on too strong. |
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01/02/2008 09:15:15 AM |
| good idea. light is a little hot on the models face though. |
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01/02/2008 07:09:04 AM |
| I love the fact that you actually worked to set up a shot and make it work. As you can probably tell your lighting is a little harsh, but that is ok. The refelection off the sword is a bit distracting. I think you did fit the assignment. |
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01/02/2008 02:41:27 AM |
| This is a cool shot. I like the composition. I wish there wasn't so much light on the sword so we could focus on the flame. |
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01/02/2008 12:13:34 AM |
| Interesting photo. The glare of the sword is a little distracting and the flame is hidden due to the background. |
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