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Challenge: Yellow IV (Basic Editing)
Collection: Miscl
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: Salt Lake City
Date: Jan 13, 2008
Aperture: f/9
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Urban
Date Uploaded: Jan 15, 2008

Bright color in an otherwise gritty industrial area. Their main sign has a red arrow through the words "In and Out." The smudges on this sign appear to be remnants of a similar arrow.

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Place: 196 out of 273
Avg (all users): 4.8062
Avg (commenters): 4.6250
Avg (participants): 4.8795
Avg (non-participants): 4.7714
Views since voting: 597
Views during voting: 357
Votes: 258
Comments: 8
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/22/2008 02:53:23 PM
it needs cropping.
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01/22/2008 09:37:19 AM
Well, the photo certainly has plenty of yellow in it. :-) The subject is a bit plain. Some choices made in the composition are taking away from this. The drive at the bottom, 2/3's of the door on the left, a fraction of red on the right...without seeing the location it's hard to say what could have been done differently - perhaps nothing. Just making an observation. Good luck in the challenge.
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01/19/2008 08:24:23 PM
I would have used a different framing here.. the white door seems to be my main focus.
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01/19/2008 05:45:05 AM
Not so sure about the composition. Certainly meets the challenge though :)
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01/18/2008 10:39:35 PM
I like the colors and the scene though I feel the composition could have been a bit stronger. By moving the crop over from the left, you would eliminate the red light and window but gain the rest of the red door. I think think that might have made this a stonger picture, jmo.
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01/17/2008 04:27:38 PM
Not terribly interesting but well executed anyway. I think I might have cropped out the ground and the window frame (?) on the right.
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01/16/2008 11:15:41 PM
Great color. I think I'd like it better without the sign... maybe just the red door without the garage door.
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01/16/2008 10:00:08 PM
Bright. Very bright. Certainly could not drive past that place and miss seeing it, could you?
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