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02/26/2008 09:24:02 PM |
| Nice idea, but the bg is a bit distracting, and its not well focused, 5. |
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02/26/2008 12:33:57 AM |
| The idea is good and I like the guitar behind him, but IMO there are too many distractions which make your shot messy and distract from the subject, e.g. the empty water bottles and pizza box on the table, the pile of clothes on the couch.. |
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02/25/2008 06:38:52 PM |
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02/25/2008 06:04:20 PM |
| The backround stuff is very distracting. Not a Great picture, in my opinion. |
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02/25/2008 03:21:39 PM |
| The background is too cluttered and it seems accidental not planned to show peace in chaos or anything like that. Try removing everything on the couch and the coffee table and get get a little closer as well. |
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02/24/2008 09:30:08 PM |
| I would have moved the water bottles and clothes before the photo. |
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02/24/2008 04:37:25 PM |
Lovely idea and an impressibe full lotus by you subject.
A couple of thoughts -
1. the focus seems to be slightly off which will no doubt mean it gets dinged in the voting
2. The clutter on the table (water bottles, pizza box etc, actually takes away from the tranquility of the subject). It may have been better to go with a plainer backdrop and I would be interested what this would have looked like in B&W
Just my 2pence worth |
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02/23/2008 03:21:59 PM |
| a little oof and the you need more lighting here. |
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02/23/2008 01:48:59 AM |
| I think I would have cropped this as a portrait orientation, keeping the guitar in at the left edge and cropping out the stuff on the table to the right. Technically a good exposure though |
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02/22/2008 07:01:22 PM |
the background is distracting, messy hair, water bottles? could have been moved. and i dont get the hat?
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02/22/2008 11:35:18 AM |
| a good pic, but there is just to much going on in the background. |
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02/22/2008 12:04:03 AM |
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02/21/2008 05:18:03 PM |
| Another yoga shot. The clutter of the room and the harsh lighting from the flash work against a sense of peacefulness in this image. |
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02/21/2008 10:10:42 AM |
| The clutter could have been cleaned up to draw more attention to the subject. Also the face instead of the water bottles could be in focus. |
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02/20/2008 09:30:51 PM |
| the background and side items (water bottles, pizza box, jacket) are distracting. |
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02/20/2008 08:40:44 PM |
| ha! zach! i didnt know you used this for DP. |
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02/20/2008 06:49:28 PM |
| Nice idea, although composition looks cluttered. |
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02/20/2008 03:42:49 PM |
| The pose and perhaps the guitar are fine, but everything else is very distracting. A plain white, black or colored background would be fine. Secondarily some work with the lighting would help. |
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02/20/2008 05:43:44 AM |
| The idea is a very good one, but it's too brightly lit and there's too much clutter - it needed a very simple background. |
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