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02/25/2008 10:29:44 AM |
| The background is too washed out and bright it draws attention away from your subject and makes it look darker. Maybe shooting in a different time of day or different angle would help. |
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02/23/2008 05:36:07 PM |
| Bicycle in the back is kind of distracting, also your model has the handlebar stuck in her ear |
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02/23/2008 04:54:16 PM |
| The background is very washed out as a result of the sun coming in the window. Shooting at a different time of day might have been better. |
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02/23/2008 03:55:30 PM |
| the windows in the background take away from this. |
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02/22/2008 12:34:30 PM |
| I think the bike behind the chair is a little distracting from the main subject |
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02/22/2008 01:17:25 AM |
| I love this concept! It may have been improved a bit by simplifying the background - having something out the windows other than white light. |
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02/21/2008 05:36:28 PM |
| Yes, she looks peaceful and relaxed. I find the bicycle distracting, especially the handlebar growing out of her ear. |
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02/21/2008 04:53:50 PM |
| She doesn't look so at peace at all. It's difficult to pick up a message of peace from a smile so insignificant. |
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02/21/2008 11:19:45 AM |
Hmmm... Feels like a bit of a shoehorn.
It is a nice photo, but doesn't do much for me to be honest. I find the bike to be a major distraction, and the subject is a bit too dark while the background is majorly blown out. I apologize if this offends, but hopefully you take this as constructive criticism. |
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02/20/2008 08:35:59 PM |
| if the subjects face was at a profile the lighting would have worked better for you |
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02/20/2008 03:44:41 PM |
| Nice pose. I think it would be better without the bike. The light through the windows is kind of harsh also. |
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02/20/2008 12:51:24 PM |
| Love the funky rainbow coloured bike in the background - adds to the feeling of the photo. |
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02/20/2008 03:59:20 AM |
| I feel the light from the window is too overwhelming and the bicycle is distracting. If you had taken it in very low light it would have a greater feeling of peace. |
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