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03/17/2008 10:25:41 AM |
| the sharpness of your photo makes it stand out |
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03/16/2008 09:33:55 PM |
| Shadows are too harsh, and rock in foreground doesn't add anything to the composition. |
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03/16/2008 02:18:50 PM |
| almost a beautiful image in spite of the gruesome-ness of the subject.. The lighting just starts being a bit harsh around the neck.. This might have looked nicer in duotone or b/w.. |
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03/14/2008 10:02:24 AM |
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03/14/2008 09:15:35 AM |
| This deffinetly is polution but a very nasty pciture. |
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03/14/2008 01:05:00 AM |
| The image of a dead bird is not especially appealing to me, but it is a powerful message about pollution. That said, I wish that you had removed the stick on the right and the rock in the lower left. That stick is really distracting. Also if you had tried some different angles (not that you didn't), you may have found a more interesting composition besides dead centre (no pun;). The way the bird's head is tucked under its wing creates some extra emotional impact IMO. |
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03/13/2008 09:26:51 PM |
| straight to the point and well taken |
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03/13/2008 10:07:26 AM |
| This is a good image for this shoot. It shows how messed up our world can be. This shows a lot of detail. |
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03/13/2008 09:57:38 AM |
| I really like these "reaction to pollution" photographs, i think they send an important message. The composition is nice but maybe there could have been more obvious signs in the photograph that would lead someone to believe pollution was the cause of death. Otherwise it just looks like a dead bird... |
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03/13/2008 09:37:27 AM |
| Such a shame. A very powerful shot. It uses real emotion to push the point across. |
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03/12/2008 09:50:22 PM |
| ew! this is a bit graphic.. try a virtical shot next tiem |
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03/12/2008 09:13:15 PM |
| This makes me sad. Guess this is real pollution, huh? |
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03/12/2008 07:22:00 PM |
| clear and focused subject but the lighting is a problem I think, also is that the water behind the subject? if so the depth of field could have been deeper |
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03/12/2008 07:03:32 AM |
| Shows pollution well, probably not to everyone's taste but it does work for the challenge. |
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