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03/26/2008 03:33:13 PM |
| You canwork on the white balance a bit in photoshop now that I have shown you the color balance, watch the apreture at which you are taking your photos, they are always softer wide open than stopped down a bit. Could have caused a bit of the loss of detail in this image. Good step in the right direction. |
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03/25/2008 10:55:40 PM |
| I feel the lighting is a bit harsh, maybe diffusing or boucing the light could help soften the shadows. |
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03/25/2008 07:06:20 PM |
| Nice working portrait that fits the challenge. Lovely smile and lighting, good job. |
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03/25/2008 12:00:05 PM |
| Perhaps, less posed and more action. Let's see her instructing. |
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03/24/2008 09:17:24 AM |
| You and I know that she is not an instructor! If she punched with her thumbs like that she would have no thumbs left ;-) |
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03/22/2008 09:13:08 AM |
| A little too "posed". She should be punishing that bag, and enjoying it. |
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03/21/2008 08:34:17 PM |
This is a nice portrait but she doesn't seem to be interacting with her environment. the punch on the bag clearly isn't a real punch and because she's looking away from the bag it just looks like a side note.
I'm also not fond of the shadow on the wall. Ideally I would like to have seen her interacting with the equipment more or even better a student and with more of the gym in the background. |
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03/20/2008 07:51:35 AM |
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03/20/2008 07:24:44 AM |
| good concept, but doesn't look like real action. lighting is too harsh, white balance is slightly off |
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03/19/2008 07:15:41 PM |
| I'd really like to see her blasting that bag instead of doing this wussy girly punch. |
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03/19/2008 03:35:19 PM |
| The lighting is a bit off, or maybe it is the white balance. I would have liked to have seen more of her, maybe zoom out a little so that the heavy bag is more visible. The cropping makes her look rather short as well...4 |
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03/19/2008 11:59:52 AM |
| this has a very snapshotish feel to it, as well I'm guessing you used the onboard flash which has created some harsh shadows. composition is slightly on the boring side as well with w kick boxer it might have been interesting to have a much more dramitc angle and pose for the photo. |
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03/19/2008 05:52:29 AM |
| This picture had potential but the white balance is off and how can you not emphasize the feet of a kick boxer? |
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03/19/2008 12:49:52 AM |
| i'm afraid this shot looks like little more than a candid to me. |
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