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03/31/2004 06:34:51 PM |
| This is a cool idea. I like the blur and motion in the drips above and below. The liquid rivulettes under the spoon are excellent. But like a lot of the other comments, I wish that the actual focus wasn't on the edge of the spoon, but more on the frothing Kool-Aidâ„¢ in the spoon itself. I like the vertical angle, personally, because it shows the interesting stuff happening on the bottom of the spoon. But maybe a different horizontal angle, where the handle of the spoon is coming toward or away from the camera would add some more interest to the composition? (6) |
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03/31/2004 10:43:54 AM |
| I didn't have time to comment a lot in this competition, but I really like this photo; the messiness is interesting, good idea and execution in my opinion! Hope you stick around and let us see more of your work. :) |
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03/30/2004 06:32:12 PM |
| This is really a messy photograph. The angle is a little odd, too. Perhaps it would improve if you showed the spoon from above. What is that anyhow, cough medicine? |
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03/30/2004 11:38:06 AM |
| It seems off that the focus is predominantly on the spoon & not the contents. More lighting toward the front or from under neath would have given it a bit more depth & showed detail of the drips on the bottom of the spoon. |
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03/29/2004 07:37:41 PM |
| one of the best i've seen so far. great job |
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03/28/2004 04:13:20 AM |
| this shot draws my attention, but would have been better if the orange liquid was in focus instead of the edge of the spoon |
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03/27/2004 11:49:33 AM |
| Beautifull shot, great idea but bad spoon. |
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03/27/2004 01:23:33 AM |
| Really cool idea. Unfortunately I don't really care for the look. Everything is blurred, except for the metal spoon, but I'd like to see more of the liquid than just the bottom of the spoon. I do like the action. Could you have gotten the background to be a more even white and perhaps brighter? Score: 4 |
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03/26/2004 12:37:22 PM |
| Spoon is too centered. I would like to see the focus on the orange lump instead of the spoon edge. |
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03/24/2004 08:52:30 PM |
| motion is too blurry ... shorter exposure could have made this pretty good |
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03/24/2004 05:28:08 PM |
| The composition is not good for this shot. What is in focus? Do I see the liquid on the top? on the bottom......no, it's OOF. The color is good, but no focus. |
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03/24/2004 07:32:11 AM |
| I tried something similar but capturing the impact in sharp detail also proved very difficult |
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03/24/2004 07:18:48 AM |
| I would have liked the orange "stuff" in focus but that's just personal taste. |
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03/24/2004 02:57:37 AM |
| Interesting idea, but I don't understand the composition; let's say the title would save it a little bit, but... and the "orange" should be the clear, sharp subject, not the spoon (or whatever that is) |
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