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03/30/2004 11:37:21 AM |
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03/30/2004 01:18:46 AM |
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03/29/2004 12:17:18 PM |
| Colour is great, a bit off focus |
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03/29/2004 12:04:12 PM |
| good subject positioning, but nothign seems quite in focus... |
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03/26/2004 08:14:08 PM |
| Cheese curls need to be more in focus. I can't decide what it is but needs something. Maybe a different background color. |
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03/26/2004 06:13:56 PM |
| Well chosen subject for the challenge, but poorly executed in my opinion. You need to get everything in focus and avoid overcropping and/or camera shake so that everything is crisp and clear. The can of soda probably could make the point of the image without the full glass next to it. Also, the point of view is too direct. Coming down at an angle of view on these subjects with a wider angle would have made the shot more interesting. |
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03/25/2004 04:43:29 PM |
| The focus is a bit too soft for my taste. I think it would look more appetizing and refreshing if the glass and can were covered with water droplets as if they'd been left outside on a hot, humid day. Nice arrangement, composition, and lighting. |
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03/25/2004 04:16:49 PM |
Not quite sharp enough, don't like the cut off on the left.
could have been a winner. 6 for composition. |
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03/25/2004 03:47:14 PM |
| Looks a bit out of focus to me. |
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03/25/2004 05:28:21 AM |
| this is too blurry and it looks like an advertisment; sorry , but i don't think it belongs here |
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03/25/2004 04:43:43 AM |
| The arrangement of your still life is very nice and pleasing to the eye. I think if the focus was sharper it would make the picture even better. |
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03/25/2004 02:57:14 AM |
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03/25/2004 12:17:05 AM |
| needs more depth of field |
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03/24/2004 06:37:44 PM |
| The set up lacks something in composition. Good colors, but the focus is also a little soft. |
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03/24/2004 12:46:23 PM |
| A lot of orange, but out of focus and not bright enough. |
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03/24/2004 12:05:34 PM |
| Great composition but poor focus hurts this image. You might also consider changing the background to remove the grain and make it solid white. This image has real possibilities. |
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03/24/2004 11:30:17 AM |
| The focus could be a bit stronger here, I think. |
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03/24/2004 04:26:15 AM |
| Focus is really off on this... the overall picture would look better with increased contrast and saturation. Good try nevertheless! |
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03/24/2004 03:54:50 AM |
| needs USM desperately. perhaps a bit more depth of field (teh cheetohs are not in sharp focus) and the glass is abit noisy (the juice inside and background are too) |
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