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Challenge: Games II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Sony DSLR-A100
Lens: Sigma 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 Macro
Location: home
Date: Apr 23, 2008
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 80
Shutter: 125
Galleries: Abstract, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Apr 27, 2008

I tried playing around with different positions for the key light, please let me know your thoughts, thank you

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Place: 55 out of 123
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05/08/2008 11:56:14 AM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I think you have a fairly strong image here. The cards help to "anchor" the shot at the bottom, and the stacks of chips help to lead the eyes up to Woody (who kinda looks like he is praying). It does seem a bit tight on either side, but I think for the most part, it is okay.

Technically, the focus and colors are good. The lighting on the woody is effective, but it seems like there is too much on the cards. If you could have "shielded" them so that they weren't as bright as Woody, it might have made Woody stand out a bit more. As it is, because they are so bright, they compete for the viewer's attention, just a bit.

You have met the challenge well. I'm sure there were some "anti-Woody" voters out there, but you still had a reasonably good response to the picture.

Best to you in future challenges.

Karma
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/04/2008 11:01:14 PM
One of the better ones this challenge. Well done! I love woody!
04/29/2008 04:07:16 PM
Good composition and lots to look at. Shadows on cards are slightly distracting though.
04/28/2008 07:00:15 PM
A little dark
04/28/2008 01:59:09 PM
little nice idea here!
04/28/2008 01:13:19 AM
Nice set-up, but you should have probably swapped the K & Q. It seems too shadowy to me.


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