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05/04/2004 11:47:08 PM |
Ok my first critique in awhile... I clicked on CC and 191 photos await!
Then clicked on give me a image and I got lucky!
Cause I got a photo I could relate too!
and this challenge is over....
Man why I did not vote on this one....Its a good one....
Lets see to make it better,
I would have another color background to bring out the guitar, its awesome brown havent seen electric like that...its really good DOF accept I think the hand on the left maybe a little more focus would help, but what do I know this is probably done while hes playing.... So really this is a great photo to me....its hard for me to give any constructive critism for it.......reading other comments now.....
Lots of pros and cons.....and by the way...this is very original its yours...And I believe guitars and the hands should be the center or focus of a good still photograph been trying to master it myself.... like giving critiques in away!
Dont give up ! and it must be late had to edit cross the t's and dot the i's......
Anyways hope to see more of your photos here...
Message edited by author 2004-05-05 00:31:56. |
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04/26/2004 01:55:56 PM |
| This type of picture is very common. It is not an original idea. |
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04/24/2004 12:55:56 PM |
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04/23/2004 10:12:54 PM |
| Too blurry for my taste. I also know nothing about how to play a guitar, so I wouldn't ever really know if this is an amazing new chord progression. I do like the colors and the fact that at least you stepped out of the box. |
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04/23/2004 02:44:40 PM |
| Godd color and use of DOF |
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04/22/2004 01:29:50 PM |
| A new progression might be serendipitous, but the shot doesn't show it too well. Maybe more ghost images of your fingers in different spots on the frets? |
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04/21/2004 11:34:48 PM |
I like the border and tones, and I can understand by the title how it meets the challenge. Nice picture, but a little wider DOF would have been nicer.
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04/21/2004 09:07:15 PM |
| This image relies entirely on the title. The challenge is to find something/someone/etc. that you didn't expect to find. Find the serendipity in the actual subject, don't make the subject surrendipitous by adding a 'discovery' title. |
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04/21/2004 03:52:09 PM |
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04/21/2004 09:29:23 AM |
| I like the angle and the depth of field. The motion blur also really adds a great element to the image. |
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04/21/2004 12:15:25 AM |
| Needs a little bit more depth of field...unless that was the effect you were looking for... |
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