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10/15/2008 04:52:28 AM |
| Heading towards the top left corner, there is an edge of paperclip that appears to be OOF. For me, this doesn't sit too well with the rest of the image. Perhaps this could be cropped square to lose that. |
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10/09/2008 10:25:13 AM |
| Interesting choice for a macro; this make me want to go for something other than flowers or bugs. Just a thought on the clips - the dull/dirty ones tend take away from the overall picture a bit. |
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10/04/2008 06:49:29 PM |
| the things we photograph...this has a lot of visual interest to me- great colors :) |
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10/03/2008 01:33:16 PM |
| I like the colors and shapes, the lighting is good also. but i definetly love a picture that makes me imagine more than I can see ;) |
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10/03/2008 03:14:28 AM |
This is so cool for something so everyday and often quite uninteresting.
Very cool patterns and a good macro as well..... |
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10/02/2008 07:21:03 PM |
| Nice choice of subject. I think the strength is the half with the paperclips, and thus would suggest changing the composition to 3/4 paperclips and 1/4 holder. |
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10/02/2008 06:12:24 PM |
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10/02/2008 01:44:16 PM |
| Creative thinking... I might have cropped a little closer on the right hand side to get rid of more negative space. |
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10/01/2008 07:25:22 PM |
| I also like the subject choice, but I don't like how the clips and the red meet in the exact center of the frame. I'd rather it was more offset so we saw more red or more clips and not equal shares of each. |
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10/01/2008 06:36:17 PM |
| Nice composition! I like all those things and the reflections. Overall, the colors looks somewhat flat and I think you should have done a little spot editing on the right side. |
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10/01/2008 06:30:21 PM |
| This is very ineteresting. I like your choice of subject. |
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