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07/06/2004 01:52:24 PM |
I love the depth and color. What about cropping from the bottom of the bars up? The stone adds alot to the color of the rusted bars and I love the view of the bird and beyond. Nice job!
Message edited by author 2004-07-06 13:53:38. |
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05/09/2004 07:56:28 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/08/2004 02:39:27 AM |
What is that poll infront of the window, wish that wasn't there, I like the bars and the rest of the photo |
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05/07/2004 07:45:34 PM |
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05/07/2004 12:53:33 PM |
how long did you have to wait for the bird? or just lucky? :D ... nice shot. |
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05/07/2004 11:49:52 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 5
Total Averaged Rating 6 Dick
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05/07/2004 07:46:01 AM |
excellent, The bird in the back ground really draws you into the photo, composition, colour, lighting...Well done = 9 |
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05/06/2004 11:48:36 PM |
Good shot--did you plant the bird? Got Lucky? |
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05/06/2004 09:11:39 PM |
looks like prison bars. awesome composition. putting the window right in the center is a great example of breaking the rules of composition and making it work. i like this alot. 8 |
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05/06/2004 06:20:32 PM |
Excellent observation and a nice depth. So much interest to compell the viewer and well exposed. Good work. |
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05/06/2004 01:15:06 PM |
Just enough going on in the pictue without being busy. I like the more subtle use of the rust! Great composition and focus. |
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05/06/2004 01:05:11 AM |
A very nice find and well captured. The window-within-a-window is great. Not sure that the pole in the bottom right corner adds anything. |
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05/06/2004 12:16:05 AM |
nice to see aged material in the different forms; your picture portrays them all well |
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05/05/2004 09:43:46 PM |
Wow! I like how you got the bird right in the middle and in a perfect position. How'd you do that? Or is the bird a fake one? Either way, wonderful! If it's real then you got very, very lucky. If it's fake, then you're very creaive. If I have to complain about something, it would be the wood thingy in the front which is somewhat distracting. Would like to know where this was taken. Bravo! |
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05/05/2004 01:57:31 PM |
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05/05/2004 12:26:02 PM |
Could have called it Wht the Caged Bird Sings...Would like more light on the bars, maybe not center the window? |
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05/05/2004 10:38:16 AM |
be a 10 if you had more depth of field..... |
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05/05/2004 08:45:12 AM |
the bird on the other side is a great detail. I like images that reward second glances. I would have like a bit more cropping on the sides, but otherwise a great photo! |
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