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05/11/2004 11:06:57 PM |
Your focus seems quite soft here. I think that I would prefer this to have a sharper focus throughout the photo. Especially since it's a 'sharp' subject. The rust does look good on the green grass. I wonder what would happen if you upped the saturation a slight bit? Definately a rusted subject and fits the challenge nicely. The bright white sky is a bit of a distraction, too bad you couldn't have caught some blue there. ~Heather~ |
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05/09/2004 10:48:00 AM |
The subject is there but I think the focus could be sharper and the distracting wires at top cropped out. The diagonal division of red and green was a good idea. |
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05/09/2004 08:10:21 AM |
Focus seems a bit off on this shot IMO |
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05/08/2004 09:37:19 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/08/2004 09:02:55 PM |
This seems to be a little out of focus. On some things a soft focus is nice, but it doesn't work on this. Machinery looks better with crisp, hard edges. |
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05/08/2004 07:45:44 PM |
I like the subject and the composition. The focus seems a little soft. Perhaps some post-processing sharpening would help. |
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05/08/2004 11:06:47 AM |
Good subject but focus a little soft. |
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05/07/2004 12:22:34 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating 5 Dick
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05/07/2004 10:22:49 AM |
the top of this photo doesn't look clear. a sharpen effect might have made a big difference. |
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05/07/2004 09:54:54 AM |
Nice cropping on the picture. Seems to be a bit out of focus. |
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05/07/2004 12:36:09 AM |
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05/06/2004 06:24:47 PM |
The Case logo looks too fresh and modern and spoils the mood a bit. Nice composition otherwise. |
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05/05/2004 11:45:52 PM |
Maybe if shot from lower angle. Orange goes better with blue than with green. |
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05/05/2004 12:33:06 PM |
I would have cropped out the Case logo, and maybe had more DOF. |
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05/05/2004 08:53:44 AM |
This image looks like it would benefit form the unsharpen mask and a touch more saturation. |
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