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05/11/2004 11:32:32 PM |
| can barely tell what this is, let alone tell if it's rusty. I think I can see a wheel near the top of the photo that is a bit orange, assuming that's the rust. I wonder what this would have turned out like if you had focussed on that one wheel. Maybe be a stronger match for the challenge. Maybe wouldn't be able to tell what it was, but we can barely do that now. I would definatley prefer a tighter close up of that wheel. otherwise, focus and clarity are alright, and lighting seems to have been on your side as well. ~Heather~ |
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05/11/2004 11:32:10 PM |
| I just don't get it. Is that a bike under the grass and weeds? Perhaps so, but hard to say. In any event, this picture isn't conveying RUST to me ... it's conveying grass and/or weeds. 2 |
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05/11/2004 03:47:35 AM |
| Zoom in on something and show whats lost. |
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05/10/2004 10:34:31 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 1
Total Averaged Rating 3.75 Dick
If I wern't looking for rust I would not be able to pick it out from the rest of the image. It needs to be more prominant for me. |
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05/10/2004 08:38:29 PM |
| Please try to show us some rust ... I now that this bike is rusted but you are suposed to take picture of the rust, not the gras. |
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05/10/2004 08:30:45 PM |
While this is a nice capture of grasses at various stages of life, I do not see how it responds to the challenge.
A 2. |
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05/10/2004 11:37:07 AM |
| very hard to see your subject. focus seems off. can't tell if it is rusted or not.. |
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05/10/2004 10:40:26 AM |
| Rust must be searched for in this shot. Could use a bit more darkening/contrast. |
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05/09/2004 01:54:22 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 3
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 4
Maybe if you had moved in closer and got a shot of the wheel guard. As it is the rusty fender is pretty well obscured and really doesn't serve to enhance the composition. Hope this is helpful. |
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05/07/2004 01:35:48 PM |
| Hard to tell what this is--my eye jumps around to figure out what the main object of the shot is. Also don't see anything clearly that's rusted. 4 |
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05/06/2004 03:40:50 AM |
| What's the thing in the picture? Bicycle? |
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05/05/2004 09:58:52 PM |
| Maybe hidden a bit too long. Not seeing rust here. |
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05/05/2004 09:51:46 PM |
| I'm really lost here to understand this pic. I think theres a bicycle down there but I could easily be mistaken. imho you could've focused more closely on a specific part of this hidden object |
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05/05/2004 06:34:53 PM |
| I'm still lost--your subject is not apparent enough for me. |
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05/05/2004 02:15:19 PM |
| The bike (took me ahwile to figure it out) is too obscured by grass to make this an interesting composition. The details are washed out. |
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05/05/2004 12:55:37 PM |
| Is something under there? Is it a bike? A little hard to see Think its a bike though, mabey more zoom on the rusty parts would be better, and more contrast, Good luck :) |
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