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05/11/2004 10:16:09 AM |
| The out of focus areas are so out of focus it make it seem photoshopped (I see that it wasn't). My eyes are drawn to the rust color on the left, but I can't all make out what it is (yet I keep staring at it rather than the flower). Still, I gave you a 7. |
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05/10/2004 09:30:05 PM |
Nice variation in colors and textures. The tight focus though leaves little to spend time with.
A 6. |
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05/09/2004 10:01:39 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating 5.25 Dick
Your rusted pipe is lost in the picture with the flower taking the lead part. |
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05/08/2004 07:36:57 AM |
| Too blurred for my liking, needs more focus on the rusty pipe |
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05/07/2004 01:56:04 AM |
| Lovely colors. The only thing in focus is the dandelion and it's very frustrating to look at the picture - my eyes would like ti to clear up so I can see the whole thing. |
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05/06/2004 08:43:53 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 3
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
Your DOF is too shallow to show much else than the flower. The rust is not very visible. As clichéd as it may sound, Rule of Thirds would have made it a better picture, in this case placing the flower where the axis of the right third and the lower third of the picture meet. |
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05/06/2004 08:29:47 PM |
| DOF is a touch distracting. |
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05/06/2004 03:32:16 PM |
| Beautiful shot. I love it. :) |
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05/06/2004 05:14:09 AM |
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05/06/2004 04:37:05 AM |
That is one very tight DOF! Unfortunately it looks like you may have removed too much of the texture of the rust. This is one macro shot I think would have worked better with a larger DOF. As it is, the green and yellow on the left are simply distracting.
David |
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05/05/2004 10:01:43 PM |
| the focus is so shallow that it's hard to make out much rust. I see what your concept was, but think it's weak with this style focus. the light is very nice as is the color. |
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05/05/2004 09:03:25 PM |
| I enjoy this shot, but I think I would have opened up the DOF |
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05/05/2004 04:46:49 PM |
| I love that you experimented with DOF here. I would have maybe had a bit more past the flower in focus - not much, only a fraction. however, lovely idea. -7 |
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05/05/2004 08:15:24 AM |
| Nice shallow DOF beautiful colors, great composition I like the flower and that other rusty pipe to the left, good depth, Good job :) |
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05/05/2004 12:43:19 AM |
| Don't know really what to say about this one but you got my attention - good job! |
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