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12/09/2008 02:55:38 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: It's impossible for me to tell where the image focus lies, and the colors are all washed out.
Lighting: While you did indeed achieve backlighting here, it is far too harsh. The face is covered in a lens flare, and the brightness just serves to push my eyes out of the frame.
Composition/Content: I do like the mood that you captured, but the flaws are for too many for mood alone to overcome.
My Opinion: I do hate that the voters handed you a new personal worst and it makes me unhappy to add that this one was probably scored about where it should have. This entry is well below your potential and capabilities that you have proven with your previous entries.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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12/02/2008 01:28:04 PM |
it blackens out to much of his face. |
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12/02/2008 12:04:48 AM |
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11/29/2008 10:20:08 AM |
Nice, introspective expression and you have the back lighting technique right on. I would like to see a little more light on the left side of the model's face, though. 5 |
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11/28/2008 07:18:31 PM |
Seems a little too dark in the front...I know its backlighting, but seems you could have somehow shone light on his face.
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11/27/2008 10:12:56 PM |
Challenge was to keep the subject from becoming a silhouette. It didn't but not by much. Quality of the details is severely lacking as well as any interesting points. |
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