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05/26/2004 05:23:34 AM |
thanks all for your comments!
I had this idea for a while before the pictures were due, but got caught up in work and had no time to reshoot! This was more of an initial test shot rather than one that gave me time to REFOCUS and recompose (I also planned to angle the brush a slight bit more toward the viewer).
Thanks for your comments however! Theres always the next one! |
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05/25/2004 09:03:59 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background (20% Weight): 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing (20% Weight): 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. (30% Weight): 4
How well does it meet the challenge (30% Weight): 8
Total Rating (Rounded) 6
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05/25/2004 01:50:26 PM |
composition is not bad, maybe a squirl of toothpaste on the brush?
I don't like the bright light on the brush. good idea for the challenge though.. |
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05/23/2004 01:58:05 AM |
| if only the brush were in focus... |
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05/22/2004 08:07:52 AM |
| Nice lighting but I don't care so much for the soft focus. Still good score from me! |
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05/21/2004 11:24:09 AM |
| Exposure and focus are problems here. I know your trying to get the gleaming white thing going and it does work to some extent on the bristles, but the handle of the brush is burnt out too which spoils the bristle effect. 4 |
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05/21/2004 09:50:49 AM |
| Great colour and lighting, but IMO wish it was more in focus...well done |
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05/21/2004 09:24:55 AM |
| Original idea and a good habit. Nice colors although a bit hot in places. Could be sharper. |
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05/21/2004 04:27:47 AM |
| Seems a bit soft. Composition & Colour are great |
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05/20/2004 11:26:16 PM |
| Great colors, nice pic. I think you have just a little too much light directly on the brush. The detail in the bristle area seem to disappear. I like that effect I beleive that you was going for (that little twinkle thing we see on peoples teeth in TV commercials) in the area top left of the brush. It just seems a little bright to me. |
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05/20/2004 10:33:00 PM |
| Nice concept and great lighting. The lack of focus draws too much of the emotion out of the shot for me, though. (did I REALLY just use the word "emotion" to describe a shot of a toothbrush?!?!?!) |
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05/20/2004 04:59:55 PM |
| good idea, but it seems out of focus to me. |
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05/20/2004 04:23:53 PM |
| Did you really need to tell us it's unedited...? |
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05/19/2004 11:30:04 PM |
| Okay, if it's unedited how did you get that light? If you don't want to share fine but I would like to know. |
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05/19/2004 11:14:08 PM |
| Now why would you not focus on the bristles? Would have been an excellent shot. |
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05/19/2004 07:52:10 PM |
| part of the brush is overexposed and the other part has a shadow... and neither is in focus..or at least from what i can tell |
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05/19/2004 06:31:38 PM |
| great backgroun...just the sun? like the lighting alot....unfortunately looks a bit soft for my taste |
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05/19/2004 04:42:46 PM |
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05/19/2004 03:21:56 PM |
| wow, nice photo! would be improved with better focal point... or any focal point for that matter. |
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05/19/2004 11:27:01 AM |
| I see a toothbroush; I don't see a habit. |
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05/19/2004 02:56:46 AM |
| I like the background. More focus on the brush would be good. |
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05/19/2004 01:58:08 AM |
| it bad, the highlight is burn.... a good idea... better exposing next time |
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05/19/2004 12:57:33 AM |
| would be great if the focus was better |
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05/19/2004 12:51:26 AM |
| A bit too bright, would like more contrast in center of brush. Good background and composition |
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05/19/2004 12:21:28 AM |
| (unedited picture) does not belong in a photo title. |
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