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04/23/2009 02:40:16 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: Made me smile with the hand drawing the camera and a picture being taken of the hand drawing the camera.
Technical: Like the execution here; the lighting is good, composition is made more interesting by the angles of the paper and the hand.
Artistic: I like the blurred hand, because I feel the pic would have looked too static otherwise. The orange of the pencil helps offset the blue of the camera body. There does seem to be a lot of white space at the lower right, though.
FWIW: I probably would have cropped in a bit more, or have the drawing closer to the spine of the sketchbook. In voting, I would give this a 6.
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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04/19/2009 03:20:25 AM |
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04/17/2009 12:51:14 PM |
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04/15/2009 01:06:23 PM |
| the motion-blurred hand is too distracting. i would have kept a more static pose...or at least held the bottom two fingers still while moving the pencil back and forth |
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04/15/2009 08:34:31 AM |
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04/15/2009 04:26:55 AM |
| i like how you captured the movement, very 1910s italian futurist. |
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04/14/2009 10:42:20 AM |
| man wish I could draw...you have a good idea and I like the hand motion it give you a feel that you are just madly drawing away... |
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04/14/2009 10:25:47 AM |
| Not a bad shot. I like the binding at the bottom left. I actually wish the hand was not blurred. |
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04/13/2009 05:22:10 PM |
| The image meets the subject matter effectively. A sound demonstration of the creative process in meeting the challenge in a very unusual way. A couple of minor detail problems as the image appears to be less than sharp as it should be - perhaps a higher shutter speed or a time lapse of the hand drawing would have been better. A good solid entry into the challenge. |
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04/13/2009 12:44:11 PM |
| nice action. might have been a bit more appealing without the brown space above and to the right of the hand. it distracts from the pristine feel of the paper |
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04/13/2009 08:49:41 AM |
| Could have used a better title. |
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