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06/04/2004 09:19:46 PM |
Hi Cole,
Greetings from the Critique club...
I like your play on words for the title.. it helps me know where you're going with the shot and it adds a bit of interest to it.
Technically the shot could use an edge(IMHO)-- much of it is oof although that could just be the slime on the bananas :) They appear soft (no pun intended -- really) and for a more domino-like feel some thing must be crisper. The bright light takes almost all the color away - it's flat and so adds no interest by itself. I like the diagonal line as it leads my eye through the shot. The black background is just right to set off the fruit.
I think you have a solid, albeit un-wow-factor shot.
Hope this has been helpful. PM me if you have any questions,
Regards,
Theresa |
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05/25/2004 03:42:59 AM |
| Great detail and DOF. The lighting could be softer though. |
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05/24/2004 07:27:23 AM |
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05/24/2004 01:28:37 AM |
| Ha. Clever. I wish the lighting weren't quite so harsh. |
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