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05/29/2009 06:51:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: looks very much like the kind of shot I would do...or attempt anyway :-)
Technical: Composition quite good, the eye goes straight to the vase and tiny flowers which are all nicely in focus. I like that the rose itself is oof, adds some depth, and macros can often look too flat. Needs a little more light coming in from behind the rose to knock out that unlit area and help kill shadows underneath, maybe help backlight it a bit to give it a glow. Almost some glare on the white petals of the toy flowers, but looks like you erred on the side of caution. Another f-stop up and you probably would have had glare.
Artistic: very simple and sweet shot, certainly meets the challenge description and you finished with a respectable score.
Overall a very decent entry, good work and look forward to seeing more!
Feel free to PM me with any questions.
Susan |
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05/20/2009 11:52:51 PM |
| beautiful rose and lovely photo |
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05/18/2009 12:19:49 PM |
| Very cute. I like the white BG and the colours. |
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