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06/07/2009 02:47:31 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
I think you know immediately why this only scored 5.47. If you wanted to get a higher score, then you should not have entered a bike in an automobile ad. Langdon's description even mentions cars, so honestly, you took a risk and you probably knew it ahead of time.
That said, I think the image itself is great. The composition is excellent. The sky, however, feels a little over exposed, always challenging in such bright sunshine not to do that. The bike itself could benefit from being a little bit lighter, but again, not a biggy. The graphics also work, although I perhaps would have left off the border. I think there is a conflict between the cleanness of the advertising graphic and the grunginess of the border, so I think I'd do without the border.
Overall I think this was very well done, but I'm not surprised it didn't do better. In a different challenge I expect it would have been around 5.8 - 6.00.
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06/01/2009 07:30:36 PM |
| Nice shot. I have the 1985 VT700C. Only difference I see is mine has dual front disc brakes & yours is a lot cleaner than mine. |
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05/31/2009 12:27:32 AM |
| Nice wide angle and a great POV. well composed with a cool background. |
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05/30/2009 05:36:17 PM |
| why ?...... this is not an auto add |
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05/30/2009 02:09:26 PM |
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05/30/2009 01:24:09 PM |
| I like the composition and set-up |
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05/29/2009 03:59:10 PM |
| Nice photo but ... motorcycle is not automobile... |
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05/28/2009 11:44:21 PM |
| Don't automobiles have more than 2 wheels? Bump up. |
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05/28/2009 10:41:37 PM |
ice composition of this image. The picture is well balanced, clean and interesting. I think the crop on this is pretty good as well, and the presentation of it is also very good from an advertising sense.
Prehaps the bike could have been a little bit lighter, just so that we can see a little more detail in it. Being Black, it is hard to get the right level of exposure to show detail, while still being the orrect colour.
A good submission for the challenge |
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05/27/2009 04:14:38 PM |
| Oh look a two wheeled automobile! |
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05/27/2009 09:08:49 AM |
| Nice clean image. You may get hit a bit from the folks who take "Automobile Ad" litterally. This picture makes me want to hop on and ride. I gave you an 8. |
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05/26/2009 01:02:29 PM |
| A really nice entry - very cool lighting and background - the theme and the slogan are outstanding - i am sure you are going to be pounded by the DNMC police for not being a car - but I think it a great entry |
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05/26/2009 01:47:02 AM |
| I like the photograph. I'm not sure if it meets the criteria of an automobile ad! I'll take it thought. It is a conveyor of passengers! ;) |
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05/25/2009 08:23:30 AM |
| Nicely done. I like the perspective a choice of atmosphere with the building behind. |
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