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06/12/2004 02:35:00 AM |
Hi Louison and * Greetings from the Critique Club *
For some reason the "Three's" challenge was full of very strong entries. You should feel very good with your finish and the fact that you seemed to have won "the challenge of the eggs."
Now lets dig into your three eggs. Technically it is perfection:
Exposure: Excellent - even with a very difficult challenge for your meter(s).
Composition: Don't see how it could be any better.
Focus: Perfect.
Other: The is a very slight band of gray about 1/2 the distance from the top to the eggs. Image would be a bit stronger without it.
The left egg merges into the background at the top. Slightly different positioning of the reflected light should fix.
Title: Not really a part of the image - but too subtle. The way the eggs are positioned, I see something like "Will you marry me?" or "Two's company, three's a crowd."
Just my ideas - and really hard to give much in the way of improvement when the image is so strong already.
-Tom-
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06/05/2004 01:37:17 AM |
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06/05/2004 01:12:24 AM |
| This is A great Photo! Id Use this photo in my office |
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06/04/2004 11:34:49 PM |
| You win the mini-contest of the three white eggs. It amazing how closely the two images resemble each other! I like the way you made 2 of your eggs "friends." Nice even lighting - good exposure. |
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06/04/2004 11:17:50 PM |
| Looks like the middle one favors the cute chick on the right. Nice composition and exposure. I want to love it, but I keep thinking, "It's just three eggs." I wish there was some little dash of color or spark of interest. Maybe some of those naturally-colored green and brown eggs? |
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06/04/2004 10:09:19 PM |
| I like the simplicity and composition of your picture. One of my favorites. |
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06/04/2004 10:29:38 AM |
| clean, well done image. has great (I think anyway) potential for stock. one egg leans away... makes it more dynamic. |
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06/01/2004 09:17:23 PM |
| nice use of rule o' thirds... i love the offset arrangement of the eggs and the perfect lighting. great shot. |
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06/01/2004 08:39:56 PM |
| MUCH better than the other 3 egg picture. |
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06/01/2004 01:49:37 PM |
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05/31/2004 04:55:16 PM |
| wow, there's another entry that's almost exactly the same.. i prefer this one, for its cleaness. great job! |
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05/31/2004 11:06:55 AM |
| I think this shot might have benefitted from some color or other contrast. |
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05/31/2004 08:48:04 AM |
| Cool picture. Well taken. |
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05/31/2004 12:57:59 AM |
| Three egg omelet! Cool ... I may be wrong here but in my monitor, there is no boundary between the background and the top ... maybe just a tad of contrast in the area and also in the shadows. But I love the composition, the ideas that the composition represent and the simplicity of it all. White on white always appeals to me. |
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