| Tye composition of the image is very right leaning. There is little on the left, and the main attention grabbing elements, the building, is in the far right of the image, partly cut off as well............To make the rocks and water more the subject, I think you needed a slightly more panoramic view, with some more space to the left of the image to move the building away from the line of third. I presume the rocks are meant to be a feature of this image. But in the black and white, this does not really work for me. I would have removed the lowest part of the rocks, and included some more sky, moving the horizon down to the 1/3 line, and with the space to the left included, would have made a stronger image for me............. |
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