Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: My eye is immediately drawn and held by the line running through the middle of the image. I agree with Kai in that aspect of the image. I also agree with Kari in the fact that the lion, your main subject, isn't very crisp, not is there enough of the window to see this as an intentional composition. As it is, it looks more like a vacation snapshot.
My ideas for improvement: Show me the window. I'd also like to see a stronger composition which would, in my opinion in relation to the challenge, include the window frame that you were peering through.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I did not vote on this particular challenge, but I would have more or less agreed with the voters. This would have been a 3 or a 4 from me. I do believe that you meet the challenge, but it isn't obvious, nor is your main focal plane where in needs to be.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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