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02/24/2010 11:18:41 AM |
First Impression: Is that it seems oddly framed. It feels to me as though there are 3, or at least 2 main subjects competing for my attention.
Composition: As stated it seems to have competing focal points, perhaps lowering the f-stop to throw focus on just one area and blur the rest may suit this shot better. I also do not care for the crop on the bottom right. Maybe leave more of the subject in or none of it.
Lighting: Seems pretty decent. Perhaps a bit more diffused light would soften the slight glare on the right side.
For the Challenge: I think this meets the challenge well. It is a macro shot and It isn̢۪t easy to tell what it is of so great job there. It finished probably right around where it should, I think most voters thought it was a good shot but just lacked a wow factor. It just wasn̢۪t memorable. If I had voted on this I would likely have voted it a 5 or 6.
Overall this shot was done ok and has some good and bad technical issues. Keep up the work and keep experimenting and have fun.
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12/28/2009 10:17:57 AM |
| This is a cool photo, and you deserve a much higher score than you got. |
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12/27/2009 10:39:48 PM |
| face of a clock. I like the subject |
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12/27/2009 09:43:32 PM |
| Some kind of compass? I'm curious about that ball in the yellow circle. What is it's purpose? |
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12/27/2009 06:42:41 PM |
| It makes me think of a compass for obvious reasons, but it probably isn't one. |
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12/27/2009 09:42:18 AM |
| Wind-up type alarm clock? |
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12/27/2009 12:48:09 AM |
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12/27/2009 12:15:51 AM |
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12/24/2009 11:13:22 AM |
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12/24/2009 10:02:09 AM |
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12/24/2009 02:41:12 AM |
| As near as I can tell, this looks like the face of a watch. |
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12/23/2009 11:12:01 PM |
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12/23/2009 09:12:28 PM |
| a whatsit thingy for a metal detector |
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12/22/2009 11:37:43 AM |
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12/22/2009 11:04:13 AM |
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12/22/2009 12:27:02 AM |
| Map or compass piece. I'll have to come back for another look. |
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12/21/2009 11:17:48 PM |
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12/21/2009 09:01:34 PM |
| watch/clock piece, excellent focus and lighting |
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12/21/2009 08:46:29 PM |
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12/21/2009 05:37:21 PM |
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12/21/2009 02:22:55 PM |
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12/21/2009 11:57:10 AM |
| The keyhole to a wind up clock? |
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12/21/2009 11:32:49 AM |
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12/21/2009 07:39:19 AM |
| the winding hole of a clock? |
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12/21/2009 04:16:12 AM |
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