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01/21/2010 09:29:36 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: I love subjects like this, rusted/broken wagon wheels slowly rotting into the ground. I gave a 6 during voting based on this sentiment.
Technical: 1/250 seems awfully fast to be shooting a stationary subject. Even handheld, you should be good to shoot handheld at 1/60. With a tripod, you could have closed down the aperture quite a bit and then slowed the shutter down for more dof and detail. Composition OK, more could have been done to make the wheel the dominant element.
Artistic: Quite a lot of stuff over on the right where not much is happening, feel that it is competing with the wheel for attention. I would suggest a closer crop, perhaps a more frontal view of the wheel.
Overall: A very promising shot. If you can, go back and re-shoot from different angles. See what you come up with.
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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01/13/2010 07:31:21 PM |
| Could use some more contrast... |
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01/11/2010 10:07:58 PM |
G9d Idea excellent prop but wheel merges into background tones. move the wheel to another location is my answer.Fill flash? if so well done
Again Bloody awful background |
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01/11/2010 11:01:07 AM |
| Great textures and subject for this challenge |
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01/11/2010 02:51:40 AM |
| A little vinegar and WD40... :) |
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