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Lesson of seduction : Feigning indifference
Lesson of seduction : Feigning indifference
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Challenge: Pieces of the Human Form (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon AF-S Nikkor 50mm f/1.4G
Location: Living dark room
Date: Jan 28, 2010
Aperture: f16
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/320s
Galleries: Emotive, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jan 28, 2010

Lightening : flash sb-600 in home-made plastic softbox.

Statistics
Place: 50 out of 109
Avg (all users): 5.6776
Avg (commenters): 5.6000
Avg (participants): 5.4068
Avg (non-participants): 5.8065
Views since voting: 1259
Views during voting: 519
Votes: 183
Comments: 7
Favorites: 2 (view)


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02/10/2010 09:07:33 PM
Greetings, Critique Club here...

Like the off centered composition and the crop. Some had issues with the harsh light, I don't and I consider it artistic license in this case. Black and white is a good choice as well.

I'm not keen on the lower part of the legs, the skin is a little "muddy" to me. I also think it would have benefited from some softening/blurring of the skin to reduce the effect of the hair/fuzz. I am not terribly fond of the way the crop cuts the hand on the right. Fairly minor.

I think this is a good image and I guess it's expected that you found a couple of antianythingresemblingnudity people here.

Hopefully this is somewhat helpful.
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02/09/2010 01:44:32 AM
I like the harshness in the skin areas. Great title as well.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/06/2010 11:19:51 PM
I love the picture, but there is something about her rightside. It looks like big moles/warts coming out of her. It just looks weird.. But that could just be me...
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02/04/2010 05:57:07 PM
nice shot- nice title- top 10
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02/04/2010 10:16:11 AM
Nice composition. The lighting seems a little harsh on the model's right side. May be my monitor.
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02/02/2010 01:45:05 AM
perfoct pose and framing, nice soft hands. would have preferred softer lighting to bring out more texture to her skin
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02/01/2010 07:47:01 AM
light on her belly is just a bit too bright, other then that well done
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