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02/03/2011 09:57:18 PM |
| beautiful, different, AWESOME .. !!..:) |
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02/11/2010 03:12:01 PM |
Hi Clive, greetings from the Critique Club!
It's really great to be able to comment on one of your photos, you have a very unique style of photo that escapes from the trendy DPC-friendly world, it's very interesting to see your shots!
Regarding this photo:
Composition
The above water tummy and leg really balance the whole photo.
I probably would like to see another hand on the other side just to give a more comfortable feeling. The nail does not distract me, it adds a human touch.
Lighting / Technique
I was really hoping for some shadow, just to get a more perspective of dimension, it could really help to have some shadows on the right places, it would "un-flatten" a bit the shot (the tummy seems a bit at the same level as the water, and not so much rising out of it).
I like the grain in this, gives it a vintage look.
Processing
Great tones on the skin, and the blue is very soothing for this picture. Great deep contrast and colour.
Overall
A 7.5 score from commentators really means that your photo had an impact on an emotional as well as visual level.
All the best for you both (three in this case) :-)
If you have any questions feel free to contact me.
Regards,
Joao |
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02/09/2010 08:45:32 AM |
| Love the blue contrasting with the skin tones and the soft feel works perfect too. Almost looks like an abstract in the thumbnail. Which shows great control over shapes. |
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02/08/2010 10:05:00 PM |
| Aww good luck to you guys! When is she due? |
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02/07/2010 01:41:25 PM |
| What a beautiful way to do a pregnacy shot! Love the soft light too. |
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02/04/2010 12:53:41 PM |
| interesting overall, the nail is quite distracting |
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02/01/2010 03:00:28 PM |
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02/01/2010 10:37:29 AM |
| Exquisite! The crop, the colors and tones, the composition - very, very good. |
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