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06/29/2004 07:24:46 PM |
My sad moment for the day...why do people have to be like that. |
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06/29/2004 12:07:25 AM |
A bit too overexposed but I see what you're going for |
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06/28/2004 10:45:28 PM |
Great photo, perhaps a little bit over-contrasty for a newspaper, but the framing is nice. I'm not sure that I like your headline though. It doesn't really sound like a headline. |
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06/28/2004 02:31:24 PM |
I don't like your headline (as a headline), but I like your photo a lot. I like that you cut off the tops of the bodies of the passers-by, keeping them even more anonymous and generic. The b&W is nice and gritty and the part that's blown out is fine. Good contrast. I'm thinking the focus is just a bit soft. 7 |
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06/27/2004 03:02:43 AM |
But when thou doest alms, let not thy left hand know what thy right hand doeth: Matthew 6:3 |
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06/25/2004 11:57:09 PM |
has potential-but photo quality is too poor |
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06/25/2004 10:47:45 AM |
I was grabbed by this image at first. After thinking for a while I think "..heard THEM say" doesn't do the picture justice. There's one guy walking away and there are 2 people facing the main subject. I think the timing for the image was a bit off. If you had waited till there were a bunch of people walking away, I think it would have made a much bigger impact. I think you have taken the theme well and have worked on a brilliant idea. Good luck. |
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06/24/2004 10:43:17 AM |
Very evocative image. The grain and slight unsharpness are very fitting. For a newspaper item the title doesn't seem appropriate though. Also, I would have cropped out the two pedestrians to the right, leaving only the guy seen from the back walking away from the beggar. 7 |
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06/23/2004 10:25:15 PM |
I always like black and white. This one really nice. |
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06/23/2004 07:44:58 PM |
Too little resolution and too much grain. Also, the highly exposed nature of this picture does not really suit the subject, which is rather dark. I do like the relationship between the man in the sandals who has just passed and the man begging, but I think the other elements of the image conflict with the story being told there. |
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06/23/2004 05:09:47 PM |
Not much detail in the white and black areas. |
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06/23/2004 04:52:33 PM |
Interesting shot. It could use a better focus. The title is not appropriate for a newspaper headline. |
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06/23/2004 11:18:48 AM |
Great photo lousy headline it speaks volumes socially yet the headline you chose is not a headline but a commentary. Scored you a 7 where a well written"headline "would have scored you an 8 for sure.
Your choice of title while a poignaint social commentary leaves me wondering why you chose it for this challenge?
Good Luck in the challenge |
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06/23/2004 05:51:15 AM |
Good photo, (little out of focus) Horrible headline, Nice attempt though. |
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06/23/2004 05:30:40 AM |
i like the idea here. the picture is way out of focus though, that's a bit disturbing. |
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