Hello from the Critique Club
First impression, I enjoy the various story lines in the image. Two conversations, the woman and the dog, and obviously the two men. What is the connection? Maybe the Hot Dud, won't let the man and woman on his fishing rig, and the dog is being let down easy. Digging the story line, even if I'm making it up! ;) As far as the challenge goes, it appears the voters did not find him appealing, but I think that may be due in part to the missed focus. The focal point is the woman's behind. The men are just out of, or just "leaving" the dof. Clearly this hurts the image based on your title. I agree with the comments regarding the need for a stronger crop or composition, but disagree with the too busy comment. I like the street feel to this scene.
Cheers,
Ben |
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