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02/19/2010 08:16:29 PM |
Hi, Critique Club here...
I love the idea of this shot. I like the "photographer" giving direction.
What holds this back for me is
1) why is the flash going off, it's inconsistent with what's happening. Someone could be testing the flash, but whoever
that would be should be paying attention to it.
2) the only thing in focus is the MUA's shoulder
3) while I can live with the fingers being cut, I can't with the eye chopped in half.
So, for shots to do well on DPC, on has to pay attention to the little details because the audience here doesn't miss much.
Once again, this is a stellar idea and I would definitely want to try it again if I were you.
If I had voted in this challenge, I would have given this a 6. If the issues with the MUA didn't exist, an 8. |
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02/16/2010 12:43:18 PM |
| A different take on the perspective theme but it doesn't really grab me. 6 |
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02/15/2010 12:32:16 PM |
| You look like you are having a great time. Creative idea for this challenge! |
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02/15/2010 09:02:59 AM |
| too busy, hard to keep my eye on one aspect of the shot, interesting take on the challenge though |
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02/14/2010 09:10:13 AM |
| great idea but I guess because of the strong light the camera couldn't focus good enough on the make up artist, it seems the focus is on her arm, 6 |
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02/14/2010 04:41:54 AM |
Interesting view but the girl is back focused and there is a lot of rule breaking on the crop (two hands, and worse: one eye).
Liked the muted tones though. |
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02/13/2010 08:13:52 PM |
| LOL funny that other photogs use those big floppy car-reflectors too! |
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02/13/2010 07:24:43 PM |
| really cool idea and set up, the make up girl kinda looks like ugly betty (who i dont think is ugly!) |
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02/13/2010 01:50:27 PM |
| I come back and looked at this several different times and now I'm like...."oh! now I see what's going on here!" I like this very much! |
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02/13/2010 09:43:41 AM |
| The sharpness seems to be on the shoulder and arm of the lady in front. In other words, this would seem to be the main subject of the photograph. Why not the face of the lady as if the model is focusing on her? |
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02/12/2010 02:19:43 PM |
| Creative take on the challenge. I love it. |
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02/12/2010 02:04:05 PM |
| This is interesting. I like your take on the challenge. Good job. |
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02/12/2010 01:38:28 PM |
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02/12/2010 11:01:39 AM |
| I can't see very well the challenge concept on this |
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02/10/2010 12:02:03 PM |
I can't believe I had a Canon camera on my hand...it took all my willpower not to drop it :)
Just joking, it was very nice to help Insomniac doing this shot, it was a great idea from him, and really hope it will be understood by the voters (not voting). |
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